Baalshamon
I created my first ever video and would love some feedback and advice on making them better for the future.
"The Video - STLN":http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AJ5Y7hE0kZ0
-Thanks
-Steve
"Star Trek Late Night":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaigns/star-trek-late-night
"Duskreign's Campaign of the Month - December 2011":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaign/wyrmshadow/wikis/122011
Comments
Looks good. However, I noticed that mystery was spelled "mistery" in your video. Unless it's intentional, you'll want to correct that.
killervp
"A God...Rebuilt":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaigns/a-god-rebuilt
Duskreign's "COTM for November 2011":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaigns/wyrmshadow/wiki_pages/112011
Just trying to help out.
"Here it is":http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3joAOW-Cqek
it's a good work, very dynamic (and hot !), but like Killervp, I think some move are always too fast, and you should use transition effects between every image.
I'm sorry, it's difficult for me to be clear in english, you could check my "Dark Sun trailer":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaigns/dark-sun-a-trova to understand what I want to mean.
-Pils
Dark Sun ● La Décade des Héros : Face the Fire of the Dark Sun... a World ravaged by Sorcery! (CotM - Dec 2012)
Les Royaumes Oubliés : A D&D 5e old school style Forgotten Realms campaign!
(And I'm so soooorry for my poor english...)