Star Trek Late Night

Baalshamon

I created my first ever video and would love some feedback and advice on making them better for the future.

"The Video - STLN":http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AJ5Y7hE0kZ0

-Thanks
-Steve
"Star Trek Late Night":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaigns/star-trek-late-night
"Duskreign's Campaign of the Month - December 2011":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaign/wyrmshadow/wikis/122011

FrankSirmarco

Stephen:

Looks good. However, I noticed that mystery was spelled "mistery" in your video. Unless it's intentional, you'll want to correct that.

GamingMegaverse

Looks good... I would add a link to your campaign, extend some of the shots (some move too fast), fix "Mistery" and say that the Dark Side will attempt or try to seduce... but looks good overall.
killervp
"A God...Rebuilt":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaigns/a-god-rebuilt
Duskreign's "COTM for November 2011":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaigns/wyrmshadow/wiki_pages/112011

Baalshamon

thanks guys still working on editing the thing and will make sure to fix those errors.

Baalshamon

Ok I redid the video.

"Here it is":http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3joAOW-Cqek

Pils

Hi Stephen,

it's a good work, very dynamic (and hot !), but like Killervp, I think some move are always too fast, and you should use transition effects between every image.

I'm sorry, it's difficult for me to be clear in english, you could check my "Dark Sun trailer":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaigns/dark-sun-a-trova to understand what I want to mean.