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• Herne

  Posts: 1 March 2009

  I would greatly appreciate it if you would take a look at my homebrew world and let me know what you think. It is not finished, and I have not worked on it in a while but would like to get started workin on it again. Take a look and give me your opinions, ok? the addy is
  
  http://Oramis.wetpaint.com
  
  Thanks for your help!
  Herne
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  FemmeLegion

  Posts: 521 April 2009

  I think the biggest thing to expand would be cultural stuff about the playable races. I'm always a big fan of that kind of stuff, but I think it's especially important in those cases where the playable races are going to be different from the archetypes presented in the PHB. If you don't want folks talking like John Rhys-Davies when they play their dwarven/mulish characters, make sure they know that right away. That sort of thing. =)
  
  Also, more religion! This kind of ties into culture if you think about it, but how long has this world been up and running, and how long have the gods been part of it? Do the different races have different opinions of the various gods? The one thing I was most proud of in the "Stands Alone" campaign I eventually scrapped was my treatise on comparative mythology, wherein I showed how humans, dwarves, and elves/eladrin had different opinions and knew different stories about the gods. I fully intend to resurrect that in the campaign's new iteration.