Blackmoons
Ok so we just opened up our new campaign Valcarnum, drums of war and would like some feedback. Feel free to comment, critique, or criticize (be gentle :P ) and as always thanks in advance.
https://valcarnum-drums-of-war.obsidianportal.com/
Comments
[1] The music selections that play on the "Front Page":https://valcarnum-drums-of-war.obsidianportal.com/ and the "Wiki Main":https://valcarnum-drums-of-war.obsidianportal.com/wikis/main-page page are fantastic - and set an awesome tone. BUT, having the music cut off when moving about the site is a little annoying. Particularly on the "Wiki Main":https://valcarnum-drums-of-war.obsidianportal.com/wikis/main-page page, where you're only there for a few seconds to get to other content.
[2] There are numerous instances in the wiki where there is opportunity for cross linking that isn't being taken advantage of. As an example, the page for "Wolves' Haven":https://valcarnum-drums-of-war.obsidianportal.com/wiki_pages/wolves-haven makes mention of both "The Covenant":https://valcarnum-drums-of-war.obsidianportal.com/wikis/the-covenant and "The Grey City":https://valcarnum-drums-of-war.obsidianportal.com/wikis/the-grey-city, but no cross linking is present for ease of browsing. Readers are forced to go back to the Main Wiki page and scan for the appropriate page that was referenced. It would certainly take some time to go back and fix this on all the pages, but WELL worth it IMO.
[3] The unused "Maps":https://valcarnum-drums-of-war.obsidianportal.com/maps tab should be removed if you aren't intending on using it. Having that blank tab and then seeing a "World Map":https://valcarnum-drums-of-war.obsidianportal.com/wikis/world-map wiki page is a bit redundant. I'm guessing this is because the resolution/dimensions available by uploading the map to the tab aren't to your liking?
Anyway, food for thought. Keep up the good work.
- Kallak
twiggyleaf
CURRENT CAMPAIGN: "Mysteria":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaigns/mysteria - set in Wolfgang Baur’s MIDGARD.
Previous CotM Aug 2012: "Shimring":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaigns/shimring
"I met a traveller from an antique land....."
CotM May 2016: Mysteria: set in Wolfgang Baur’s MIDGARD.
Previous CotM Aug 2012: Shimring: High Level Multiplanar Campaign
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