Hey there everyone. I have been developing my own campaign setting, called Pariatas, and have been diligently putting content up right here on Obsidian Portal. If you get some free time, why not take a look?
http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaign/pariatas
I will be posting new content as much as I can, daily as my goal, so weigh in with comments, questions, or even suggestions!
I am also running a campaign in this world which is set to begin at the end of this month, so check that out too!
http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaign/dirge-of-the-damned
I jumped right to the pantheon, because that's where I've put in the most work in my own campaign.
The only thing that really jumps out at me is that I would not refer to Elhaym as "The Maiden". At least in the contexts with which I'm most familiar, "maiden" refers to a virginal female, and seems to be the exact opposite from what Elhaym rejoices in being. "The Mistress" might be more appropriate, or something more poetic like "The Red Queen".
did you happen to click on each deity? i have additional information there for each deity, including domains, favored weapons and the dogma for their faith.
I didn't get to all of them before this thing jumped out at me, but yes, I was clicking on individual links and that's why I formed the opinion I did. And I like "paramour" as a word. =)
the archetype of the Maiden comes from paganism, an aspect of the triple goddess reflecting the essence of fun-loving youth. I think that your goddess reflects many of the elements of the triple goddess aspect most often called The Lover. something to think about, maybe?
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http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaign/pariatas
I will be posting new content as much as I can, daily as my goal, so weigh in with comments, questions, or even suggestions!
I am also running a campaign in this world which is set to begin at the end of this month, so check that out too!
http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaign/dirge-of-the-damned
Cheers,
Doom Crow
The only thing that really jumps out at me is that I would not refer to Elhaym as "The Maiden". At least in the contexts with which I'm most familiar, "maiden" refers to a virginal female, and seems to be the exact opposite from what Elhaym rejoices in being. "The Mistress" might be more appropriate, or something more poetic like "The Red Queen".