I liked them! The shifts in viewpoint came in nice, consumable intervals so it kept the adventure log fresh with the sense of a whole group participating simultaneously.
I had already commented on DARK TRIBE and have left a further comment on THE SEARCH. In view of your request above, I would say that the descriptive writing is good and well written and that the dialogue is pretty dynamic, strengthening the characters and allowing humour to come through easily (e.g. Entry of THE MASK to the BAKERY). Personally, I find the log a bit too long, but if your players are happy with it, then my feelings won't matter a jot! However, with such a long log, you may wish to consider adding a couple of images - always helps to break down massive walls of text. (....and I still love that FONT!)
twiggyleaf
CURRENT CAMPAIGN: "Mysteria":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaigns/mysteria - set in Wolfgang Baur’s MIDGARD.
Previous CotM Aug 2012: "Shimring":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaigns/shimring
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"I met a traveller from an antique land....."
CotM May 2016: Mysteria: set in Wolfgang Baur’s MIDGARD.
Previous CotM Aug 2012: Shimring: High Level Multiplanar Campaign
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I had already commented on DARK TRIBE and have left a further comment on THE SEARCH. In view of your request above, I would say that the descriptive writing is good and well written and that the dialogue is pretty dynamic, strengthening the characters and allowing humour to come through easily (e.g. Entry of THE MASK to the BAKERY). Personally, I find the log a bit too long, but if your players are happy with it, then my feelings won't matter a jot! However, with such a long log, you may wish to consider adding a couple of images - always helps to break down massive walls of text. (....and I still love that FONT!)
twiggyleaf
CURRENT CAMPAIGN: "Mysteria":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaigns/mysteria - set in Wolfgang Baur’s MIDGARD.
Previous CotM Aug 2012: "Shimring":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaigns/shimring
"I met a traveller from an antique land....."
CotM May 2016: Mysteria: set in Wolfgang Baur’s MIDGARD.
Previous CotM Aug 2012: Shimring: High Level Multiplanar Campaign
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