RayPrancer
So, I've just finished my first session of my latest campaign. I'm looking for feedback on the advenutre log post located here:
"The Curtez's Arrive":http://www.obsidianportal.com/campaign/ray-s-south-america-idea/adventure-log/the-curtezs-arrive
Is it any good, and how can I make it better?
If you want to give feedback on the rest of the campaign, wiki etc feel free.
Ignore the names next to the PCs - I don't really play them all myself, I just DM - Hernando is played by the DM of the other game, and Juan by the player who was playing the rouge.